Thursday, January 1, 2009

Burned Alive

Imagine you’re one of the characters – Write an alternative ending to the story.
“Burned Alive” [Souad]


… Although Souad was married in Europe after her countless treatment for her burnt body, things did not go on smoothly for her.
“SOUAD! COME HERE QUICKLY BEFORE I SMACK YOUR HIDEOUS FACE!” hollered her husband. Souad dashed towards her husband hastily.
“Yes?” questioned Souad. Her husband pushed her onto the hard and cold floor.
“Look at what you’ve done? Look at this! Why is there a stain on my sofa? Why are you so careless to spill your drink? WHY ARE YOU SO CARELESS! What if bugs crawl onto the sofa? HOW HOW HOW?” screamed her husband, infuriately.
“I’m so sorry; I promise I won’t do it again. I promise.”
“Always say, but never do.” He shook his head and walked away.
Souad walked towards the bathroom, close the door, and wept pitifully. Tears rolled continuously down her scalded cheeks. She was never allowed to cry in front of her husband, if not her husband will reprimand her. She looked into the mirror, and saw her awful and burnt face and thought, “Is this my fate? To live in a world controlled by men? Even my husband controls me, where’s my freedom?”
The next day, she woke up and realise her son was right beside her. He flew from West Bank all the way to Europe. Since her son was living alone in his foster family’s house in West Bank, he said,” Mummy, I have never gotten a chance to live with you since I was a baby. But it’s okay; I know why you sold me to another family. It is because you love me so much that you didn’t want me to suffer with you and my irresponsible father in West Bank. You’ve suffered too much, mummy. Let’s go live somewhere else, so that you won’t be controlled by stepfather anymore.”
“I’m afraid I can’t. If your stepfather finds out, I’ll be in hot soup!” Souad said sadly.
“Don’t be afraid mummy, I’m here, and you won’t be in trouble.” Souad’s son calmed her down. She reunited with her son and regained her freedom. From then on, Souad began a new lease of life.

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